Lots of improvement!
Wow! The sound was much better quality in this one. You've got an original style that cracks me up - I hope you keep submitting work like this. A few quirks:
The sound got too quiet while in the water. And that guy's squeaky voice, while funny, got tiresome by the end.
There was a smattering of music, but it needed more to set the mood or whatever music does.
I liked the cameos of Grandma and the Creepy Jailbird again. Plus that goldfish was priceless.. ah, Wisconsin, country of countries.
Excellent work! Can't wait to see more.