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My 3rd cartoon with the matchstick characters. The overlapping dialogue helps develop the characters, I hope.
A new series involving three characters in this episode discussing which video they are planning on renting. It is a funny idea, with a different sort of outcome involving a cop. The artwork was not bad, the character's designs were each rather basic, but the cop's definately stood out in my opinion. While you may like the idea of overlapping audio - I do not prefer it as I like to actually hear and decipher it. The voices were ok, and could use some improvement as it was obvious that you were breathing hard on the microphone in some cases - but I would rather hear one at a time, rather than them all at one time. You need a preloader and a play button.This series definately shows promise, good luck.
So I go down to the Video King...
...Well. I can TOTALLY relate. That mummy guy is my friend...And i'm that...You know...Awesome panda. Say we go to Video King. I say, "What do you want to get?" He says, "I don't know what do you want to get?" I say, "Wait wait, we came here because you said you wanted a movie." He says..."Well, I don't know what movie I want". I love these kind of things I can relate to. It's so freakin' funny. If you want to reply to this, you can find me on AIM, on Pantastic05. Peace and Good Luvin.
Nice but humor was flat.
Animation was a little quirky and the voice diologe was poor. It was
not bad but it could have been better.
these characters have potential
everything is well drawn and the script is quite funny but you need to animate better and improve the sound quality this series has potential!
I would like to see more. :)
A short film about a park bench
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