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this is a stupid flash but i was my first one that i have done.
I added you to my favorite autors as number two because I know you will become famous.
(please add me to your favorite, I want to get the title "famous artist")
and visit my site wahnsinn.tk
yo necca that was tight son, fo real! keep it real duwg
Not stupid at all.
But instead of bashing you, like you did to me, I think I'll give ya some constructive critcism!
Although I understood what was going on, it was still fairly difficult. I mean, you can assume that they were a divorced couple, and in a fit of depression he went to her house and killed himself. We all know there is problems graphic-wise, but hell, we can't all be good flash artists right? Especially if it's your first time. However, the only thing that's was on account of laziness to my knowledge was the low quality of sound you had. Only thing there was rain fx- and not even sometimes! That really can distrubt the feel of the flash. But hey, I can't blame you, I do half-ass it a little on my stuff sometimes too. I'm not going to tell you to "keep trying and you'll get better". Because that just annoys the hell out of me, and chances are you won't be using flash again. Still, not too bad for a firstie. 2/5
i was not bashing you i was just made that one of my flashes that i put on here got blamed...but it was better than my first flash. thanx for the good reveiw.
loved the music. make people walk and wheels turn. did u purpusfully forget the n on again. also i got confused when the girl was looking at the guy holding a gun to his head, then sudinly the masked guy was there, and then he wasnt again.
Just Good Enough
Y'know, the graphics were what saved you in the end for me - you did a nice job drawing it all out - payed attention to the backgrounds and details - you really need to work on your animation and try to incorporate some Frame By Frame into it (especially for parts like shooting yourself in the head) and i think that the shooting himself in the had vs - shooting his alter ego guy should have been seperated more, maybe by tinting the imaginary part blue or brown or some other color (create a square of the appropriate color that covers the animation area then change it to a symbol and make it transparent)
i liked the story line, though i do wish there was more lip-synching - maybe him and his alter ego hallucinated dude can be talking to each other in the car or something - pretty good stuff altogether - keep it going!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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