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Meh.. Its a short little clip I basically did for practice. This is my 2nd animation. With some more time now, Im hoping to do alot of animation work in the future, but Im doing these shorts for practice. Anyway, enjoy.
interesting idea, but...
It's WAY too short. The artwork was pretty nice, but everything happened far too quickly. Perhaps you could've made it longer by having the bird stalk the 'worm' for awhile, have the bird dramatically build up some strength, and then... well, the whole joke. Also, for the note at the end, I felt two major flaws:
1) It went by way too fast, and just kinda cut off to the preloader.
2) It kinda ruins the whole setup. It would probably be better to cut it out altogether.
All in all, it's a very clever idea, but it just needs a bit more work.
Ok, what was that? The graffics were ok but the story???
It was like 30 seconds! Next time put more work in the flash.
I give you a five!
Because you used elliot smith music. Hes marked as my favorite band in my profile. I think between the bars or pictures of me is the best song of his. The art in your movie was pretty good, but it was too short. Maybe if they had moved or something. But you still get a five
That was pretty pointless. The music didn't compliment the movie. It was just.....nothing.
How didnt the music fit? It may not have synched up perfectly, but each chord change alternating with each stare.. And then the bird gets eaten after "pleased to meet you"..
Only problem is that it's so short... but what's there is excellent. Nice little flash. Amazing graphics- it looks awesome.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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