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this is my second flash, and i personaly fink its alot better then the first although i am still new to the program. its short so be warned and id like to thank everyone for your feedback on 'Graphics advert'
anyway thx gyz nd enjoy =)
It was a prettyu nice movie, not something too special, but it was pretty nice.First of all, the graphics was pretty good, I like the way the background is drawn. The houses are drawn perfectly well, so as the sky and the moon. Santa and his deers are also well drawn, but the child is very badly drawn. Second of all, the style was pretty bad, you didn't build an atmosphere at all. maybe a humorous atmosphere could have made this animation a lot funnier, but it has nothing funny in it. Third of all, the sound was horrible, there barely was any sound, and the "Woosh" sound was very loud and annoying. You should add a soundtreck at the background of the movie, it would also add points to the style. Fourth of all, the script was pretty poor. It wasn't that funny, and as I said before, you didn't really build anything that could improve it, at all. The script was funny just a little bit, and only at the end. Anyway, this is a nice movie, but you should work better on it, next time try a bit harder.
For a second flash its good.
However after you hit play you must do "right click>play" to begin it. Other than that the sound seeme pretty in sync with the flash however the graphics were a little choppy. Keep up the good work :).
well to play u just hav to click the misteltoe but thx for the review
It took forever to watch when compared to the actual content. It also needs some music. But besides of that, viewable. The mistletoe-thingy was weird tho, because the PLAY-button had been already pushed.
i see well i added the pre loder in after i had alredy made the mistletoe the play button i guess thats why it seemd wierd nd yeh music got it thx for the 7/10 =)
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