In execption of the date

Hello Clipnotdone,
RandomFlicks told me to check this out. I looked at the date of submission so i'll take that into account, The animation in some places was "Shoddy" and mixed of example.
"When he(the character) was smashing his head on the desk, it seemed to bow before the character even hit it!"

Also When doing characters try to draw a next for points of rotation and it makes the character stand out more if the characters outta lines are thicker than the things in the backgound.
now thats the bad heres the good, the song chosen was a good song for what i guess you can call a story line but yes animation is pretty decent for a first animation good job. I found the easter egg it was quite charming. I also like the menu bar around the screen.
Well i only watched it once and thats all i have to say
I take into account you are most proberly better than this now(because i was reviewing it like it was back on the date) but yes i hope to see more from you
-Macbeth Animations Inc.

Most Excellent!!!

This is a very nice first submission and i found the easter egg at first i thought it was on the calander but then i paused it and looked at wat the button sed and then went through the movie and found it in the commentary(no going to reveale its location) nicely done and yes the menu bar does look alike to the SFB menu bar but it's nice and you might want to put more thought into character design i know you gonna say "You havent even got a submission you No0b" But his neck is very stubby well i believe ive sed my 2 cents
-Random Flicks

Hey, I found an easter egg...

but the easter egg didn't do anything...

Had fun tracking it down though...

behold the power of tab.

Good job man

It was really good cept the stuff went way too fast for me to even realize that it was saying something important at first. I didn't want to pause and ruin the song but it was good none the less. Rock on.

heh

man, that would suck. Its pretty hilarious.