Score: 0
"Well Crud"
date: February 4, 2008
My first review, which is as follows:
[Was this an artful flash? Complete with a little poetry, maybe a message, or some kind of statement? No? Just another lame uselessly violent flash that involves necrophelia? Well then: 0.
Your voices are rather well dubbed, but your art is just about two steps away from being stickmen. Overall it looks as though all your mind is capable of ejaculating is mysoginistic tendencies and necrophelia... But seriously dude, there was no need for any of this, none at all... Put down the flash, and go learn to be sociable.]
Was marked as inappropriate by the mbot because I did not use enough commentary, or constructive criticism. Well, I suppose I can add a little of that to make a well rounded review. Here it goes:
This isn't funny. All it is, is random death. Which, actually COULD be funny, if there was a little context for me to understand it. DId the girl do something bad to the guy? Is the guy hallucinating? Is it the guy's fantasy? I don't know, so, I can't laugh at this, or find any of this interesting. Heck, you don't even NEED any sort of story, just tell me what is going on.
Alright, so the argument can be made that you do discretely tell me what is going on, and it is just random mayhem. Well, fine. Great. In that case, add some background, maybe color, or more character detail. Improving the quality of your artwork would go a long way to help this animation.
All that nice stuff being said, the stars speak for themselves. Hope I helped.