alright

it's good since your just starting, but the storyline was confusing.

bad

this was way too short but I do like pancakes, what was with the pie thing? I don't get it? I like pie but..

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was abit short, i mean really short, also lacked in "BACKROUNDS" the gry backing was just abit plain, the "CHARACTERS" were really good though, and you also might want to add some color for extra quality to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, some backrounds and make it longer then 4 seconds...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short almost black and white toon needs some improving...

~X~

mah review

those graphics were slightly minimalistic. And uhm, I guess the flash itself was about two people making pancakes... or something (those this thing have a deeper meaning or something?). I guess I'm gonna give you all sevens because,in my opinion, this flash was neither very good nor very bad.

good but bad

ok i love your characters... i think you should make another toon with them im... but this time take a while to think of a story and other things... plus make a play agian button... get the newgrounds button and put this script

on(release){
_root.gotoAndPlay("start");
}

then go to the 1st frame of your animation and click propteries and give the frame an instance name of start... if u need further help my emails in my profile... keep up the good work...
kieran.