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Here is a cartoon on a thing i done in school.
P.S the iceimp theme song is by misfits: dig up her bones!
24fps, more then 3 minuties long. enjoi!
It's not the best.. but not the worst. the sound quality was low (whihc wasn't too bad) but you animation wasn't very smooth. and the storybook thing got old. though, it wasn't All bad. I liked the storyline and your art was alright, but you didn't have any emotion. I mean, beowulf was yelling at the cloaked guy about killing some brothers.. his face didn't change. his eyes still big and buldgy.
anyway, your work was alright. next time, just work on how you animate the characters a bit more, and add some emotion. (like some brows going down, or squinting) keep working, I'd love to see more stories.
ill give ya credit
this is by far one of the best tales ever written. I studied Beowolf for many years and beside some minor errors in the story you did ok i cant give you a great rating on the animation however. little key not the kingdom was kalled hrothgar not just meadhall. But you got most of it right.
Never read beawulf but this was cool. You need a new mic like me xD, get one for christmas! or buy a new one!
Bettur Lukk Necst Tyme...
Dude, ever hear of Spellcheck? There had to be at least a dozen typos in that thing. The voice of Hrothgar really pissed me off too. He was the only guy with any accent and it sounded like he was going to keel over dead at any second. The character models left a lot to be desired, too. Try to go for something beyond anime-based characters, it's just what everyone else seems to be doing. Other than that, I honestly think you did a decent job. You covered the actual story very well. Decent job this time, but a few improvements would make it even better. Good Luck.
Weht uO telkin abt willias?
Very nice, I'm impressed.
Your work looked really good, and it's nice to see Beowulf on Newgrounds.
I believe if you put paper in front of the microphone while you're recording, it should cut out that extra noise on the voices.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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