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Well, you got into the Christmas collection! I actually really do like this song. I'm glad it wasn't done in the regular speak a phone voice or whatever that is. It was still just one frame. I appreciate you having this cool song. Slim Shady has been parodied a lot.
It's weird to imagine Santa being slim. The bit at the beginning was pretty good. I guess I would recommend this. It's not much, but the song is good. It's fine for something short.
I couldn't understand what was being said at the beginning, but the song lyrics were funny and understandable. I, however, think it should be rated +13, not Suitable for All...
((( COULD BE BETTER )))
This was ok but seemed to lack something, maybe better graphics, but more characters and scenes aswell, and also i couldnt understand what was being said so maybe add some subtitles it would help alot of people to understand whats being said...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content, more scenes, more characters, Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting, The one thing i find an issue with clock/lock flash's is the "VOICES" always hard to hear or understand whats being said, so i would suggest some subtitles for an overall better understanding of whats going on...
Funny but could be abit better, and subtitles would help...
Lol, bear in mind this is my first flash, and i made it over a year ago. :3
it definetly deserves to get blammed
i reviewed in icreams day! this was good as the rest of your submissions! i think i put you in my favorites! ;)
thanks a lot
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