good
This was good, especially the punchline. A bit more time for us to read the speech bubbles would have been good though but thats really my ownly criticism.
Author Comments
Well, where 2 start. This is the first Phil & Glen animated comic, made as part of the Nutters Inc series, which you can view at our website. Phil has a rhetorical question in his mind that he wants to find out.
Really funny - love the characters and the script
Glen in a thong - hilarious! I love the punchline. Somehow the understated graphics suit it. These characters could soon have a cult following. Bring on episode 2!
Not bad but...
,,kinda blah.
Do a little more there,...vocals or animate more or....something.
You got the tools.
Not too bad.
I liked it, but it didn't actually show much talent. For the most part, the characters just stood there and had speech bubbles popping up beside them. I think you should make another one with more actual animation, and perhaps with some voice acting.
Anyway, good for a first submission, let's see some more! =)
SWFMania responds:
This was a test episode. More animation and maybe voice acting will come soon
hah
man that was pretty funny
graphics-9. they weren't perfect, but i liked them alot
style-10. i like ur style man
sound-8. it kept looping, u might want to fix that with a stopAllSounds(); tag on one of the later frames
violence-6 stupid bird gets hit by bus
interactivity-0. well there wasnt even a play button
humor-7. funny. enough said.
overall-8. i like this alot. keep it up!
SWFMania responds:
There is a stopAllSounds().
The song doesnt loop on top of itself. It stops, then the movie repeats and hence the sound starts again.
The "no play button" thing is rather Weebl-and-Bob-like :)
