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# Update: I got a mic and re-did the voice acting. Hope you like it better now. =) #
This movie is a short making fun of the very easy mode in the Metal Gear Solid games. If you find MG difficult, and have to play on very easy, then this movie is for you.
I had to draw everything with the mouse, and I'm relatively new on flash. Also my mic was half broken, so my voice acting couldn't be that good.
I'm accepting tips and constructive critisism, so please review =)
And no, I don't hate MGS. I just happen to find the very easy mode stupid. =)
This was pretty funny, I liked the guard's expression once Snake drew his M9... but way too short. You should try to make something longer next time and, as has been said below, expand upon the idea somehow. And maybe make Snake more stylized. He's done well, and I can tell it's him, but there's not much... I dunno, personality to him the way he's drawn. Nice job, though, I'm looking forward to more.
Thank you for the review. I will make a longer version and submit it as soon as it's ready. But as for the drawings... it's way to hard to draw with only a mouse... so that's the best I could do. =)
That was kool, I hope that there's a nother one.
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
And there will be another one. An extended version, actualy. I'll submit it once it's ready.
And thanks again for the review. =)
Good but could be better
This is a good flash, as shows by its score but there is room for improvement. You have got talent for drawing but you still need a little work, Snake and the guard looked like people and moved pretty well. However the colours seemed a little off, snake looked a little to light for example. You may also want to learn how to do some good shading; it can really improve the graphics of your flash movie. The backgrounds were a little weak I felt, I know metal gear backgrounds are dull but you could still add a little something here. Maybe add in jokes e.g. posters? But over all it was well drawn I felt.
This was a short film, and there is nothing wrong with that but you might want to think about making them longer later. Very easy is just that and it is possible to show a lot more then just the low AI in the game. Thinks of how the game could be any easier and then add in scenes, maybe the boss battle or the fact the game almost does its self for you?
You used the music from the game and it fitted in well, there were no flaws in it and it was well cut. Good job. The voice acting was passable at best, the mike used was a little off but mostly the voice just did not fit. You should look for some decent voice actors; there are quite a few around newgrounds who are always looking for work. Find voice actors who fit the work you are doing and then try them out, you will be surprised how much it can affect your score.
The joke is a good one, easy mode is too easy. But I don’t know how many times I have seen a joke about blind and deaf guards who are as dumb as driveway gravel. You really should expand on this; make it a short movie instead of just a quick sketch. There are lots more jokes you could use, and I am sure you could pull them off. Think about it for your next movie.
Overall this is a good film, worthy of a good score and shows the potential of a great flash artist, if you work hard and keep at it. Nice work.
WHOA, great review. Thanks a lot. I mean it.
And I've taken some of your advice. I'm already looking for voice actors, and planning to make an extended version. Hope it will be ready soon. And I'm waiting for your review when I submit it. =)
Btw, I got a new mic and re-did the voices, so check it out. =)
Could have been a little longer, and showed more of the very easy quirks. Besides that, not bad.
Thanks. It was supposed to be a quickie, but everyone seems to not like that. But I'm planning on doing an extended version, so stay tunned. =)
The menu screen could've moved a bit more fluidly, but that's not much.
Where did you get the credit music?
Well, I did the menu in 10 minutes... and I think it wasn't so bad. =)
All the music I got from the original soundtracks... the credit one is from MGS1.
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