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my first animation. thats me he kills at the end... also press play striagh away if u want the music to be intime... sorry its lame but its my first and was learning as i made it :P
awesome for a first go
this is seriously gud for your first try. The grapix wer pretty gud 2, i reely liked the trees, the town and most of all i liked the awesome boots & the music rocked!!! Good job
all i can say is that Funeral for a friend rule, apart from that the movie sucked.
A Fair First
That was not bad at all for a first flash.
To fix the music queqe you can just make it so it's first frame is AFTER the preloader/play button frame. Then you don't have to worry about anything. Just put a blank frame in front of it.
The animation was good for a first and the graphics were ok.
To fix the square around the trees, just make a tree on a blank background before you move it. It will make it so there is no square as the only thing it will move when you use the black arrow to mov or copy it, will be the tree itself.
I just released my first a couple days ago, myself. Cool feeling, eh? Glad to see your got through too.
Good luck to you!
You wouldn't believe how many people submit some crappy stick loop as their first... in comparison this is really good.
Some things that would make it better:
- Queue up the music when the button is pressed (which I'm sure you'll learn soon).
- Put in some voice acting or a bit more of a plot.
- Smooth out the graphics a little, or maybe make them a bit more complex. Animating the snow, for example.
I can only wish
that my first flash will be in the same level...
I learn falsh now but unfortunatly I SUCK.
I can give you some edvise thogh:
2. there is a way to make the audio start only when the start button is pressd.
3. it is easy to stop the loop and make a replay button.
4. (that 1 is abvios) you can always make better graphics.
I liked the boots... very armysh.
(coz I learn flash and this is very good for the first)
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