This is the beginning of the first episode. It isn't very long I'm just putting it on here so you guys can see what it will be like. The graphics have improved quite a bit since the trailor and Im still experimenting with a few things. Watch it and tell me some of your ideas about plot development or how to touch up the graphics. THX
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~~REVIEW~~
This was abit strange, especialy with the odd music and randon images but it worked well for the strangeness and made it even better and more interesting, allthough it seemed abit short it was a neat flash, make more of this and others like it sometime...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer flash and more story wise...
~~OVERALL~~
A strange flash with a creepy feel...
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Needs to be longer
Not bad plot and the animation lloked good too, can't wait to see the sequels!
hey
here's the deal:
for no reason at all I gave you 1 point.
now, go back to your flash animation, and earn the other 9 with a decent movie :D
needs more work
I think if you made the entire movie look just like the bit with the cigarette, it would be better. none of the movie really made sense. finish it, then submit it. 0 for sound because I don't have my speakers on, so idk how your sound is.