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First submission. Please tell me what do you hate or like in this flash. If enough people like my movie I might just make a series. Thank You for your time!
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This was notbad, kinda neat actually, the art detail could have more ffort but seems to work, and i wouldnt mind seeing more episodes like in a series so i hope you do work that out, anyways nice animation...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a little compression, but more effort on detail of the graphics...
Neat start but needs more detail, hope to see more sometime...
it was an alright teaser.... it really has the potential to be a cool series. nice choice of audio from the audio portal too... i would suggest that you keep using it too. the one thing i think that could've been better was the graphics. they were fine, but i think that they could've used some improvements.... but overall, it was a cool teaser.
Thank You everbody to take time and give my movie a coment. Now I know what do I have to improve on.
I liked it for the most part. There were some places where the drawings looked like they were lacking but if you touched it up some and had some better sound it would be nice. Revamp it and definately come back with more.
I dont know about originality, but very nice fight scenes in a few places, the people sometimes were poorly drawn..also your sound lacks edge and uniqueness, but if you fixed these things I would def tune into it...nice job aight
I actually believed the first part where the one guy punched the other. The motion was *perfect* on that part. If you refine your drawing skills just a small bit, you'd kick the asses of 90% of the artists on this site.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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