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After the really bad episode 1 being released, I hoped to design a better one, with my friends "bmc" to put a stop to the rubbish of the last one.
Episode 2: Messy Meal
Short little story about a cookie jar!
((( CUTE )))
Haha this was cute i think i remember seeing one of these before, but anyways i love all the use of color, you should make the outer lines less thick though, anyways funny flash good color...
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Make the lines less thick...
Funny and good use of color...
not so bad.
I've found it not anoying. It was pretty cool but liek the one before me only submit finished flashes
i know it's cool to have a series of films, but don't just churn out garbage. this is the 2nd "episode" in about 2 days and this one is worse than the first. I'm gathering you chose to get it done to submit rather than to make it good. PLEASE submit finished content that you are PROUD to show the NG community.
WHAT IS THAT
Ok I can say that you really didn't put any effort on this yet another bad film. The graphics are bad. The sound effects are weird. There's no style. And oh you have 1 for violence (although I hate violence in flash) at the end when lil dev is bleeding. But this one is better than the first (at least). Put your heart into it man. A flash without love is a dead flash.
Already a second one?
I actually believe you could have thrown this together between when you uploaded your last submission and a few minutes ago.
Use that to your advantage and think of some really great ideas before getting started. This was so short you could have fit ten of episode 2 into one of "lil dev." Perhaps a remake is in order?
Oh you earned a few violence and humor points because he was gushing blood at the end.
The graphics are poor, it looks rushed.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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