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11/18/2005 | 04:52AM EST
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2.71 / 5.00
Score Rank: #68,876 Popularity Rank: #108,635
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by critiqUe109: — Choose below… — 2MEG commercial Battlestar Tyranus DAS Defender pt.1 Das Defender Trailer Follow The Rabbit FOTV Trailer T.R.F. (Chapter 1) T.R.F. Chapter2 The First Wave v.2 The Reassignment The Reassignment: Contact The Reassinment: Nw Ordrs Their Finest Hour 40k
This is my very first submission, this was made out of inspiration by the movies and through the history it went through and through.Forgive my animation its still maturing so,enjoy the submission and tell me your comments. Ill keep you people posted (If I am around.)
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Average Score: 5.9 / 10
"good effort"
some of the scenes dis seem to long, think u where tryin to build tension but it didn't always work. needed to be some quik movments 2. but can see the effort you put in :) sound worked wel and the planes where drawn well.. some of the tween effects i noticed looked a little out of place like the fire at the dn for example but yea good :) keep practising :)
"Well"
It moved a little too slowly, it was a tad hard to follow, and it didn't really seem to und up anywhere...on the upside, the planes were done well and the sound was good.
It was ok. (Btw, the credits at the end really de-graded it, putting your name after everything is really cliche')
"hmmm...."
i give you a five if you tell me were you got that command and conquer music, unless you recorded it from the tv. Any way, those graphics of the planes looked alittle too good, i think you traced them. The idea was alright, but i was hoping to see a dog fight or soemthing,.
"Nerd Alert"
boriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!!!
You sir have no taste, you dont appeciate a 1st submission. Try to take it easy dude. Ok?
"Needs alot of work."
Litterally almost nothing happened in the entire video and its not short by a long shot. The music to me just doesnt seem to fit the scenes, and the sound of the bombs are kinda lame. Your animation is decent.
It needs serious work.