well this one was pretty much decent but it wasn't much better so i suggest you better it next time!!!
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This is just a trailer of a flash video what do you think?
For a first submission it wasnt bad the elves did present a good character in the movie and the way you meshed it with weaponry was funny it had a few spelling mistakes though I would encourage you to keep practicing
GET A LIFE
Yeah, no offense but this is like one of those things i imagined when i was in second grade
KaiBlade responds:
well it was my first flash and i tried unlike some people you see on newgrounds
Rant time...
Wow... where to begin.... hmmm... i think i will start with elves, NO, TOO MANY ELFS already, second, "when elf dies his soul is merged with a blade" blade = braod term (kitchen knife lol) and worst prt is, living in a blade, wtf slef awareness but not being able to do anything all you get for the rest of eternity if to be swung around at people and crtures, or be left on a shelf, or be bumped around next to some sweaty guys ass on a long and perioulous journey.worse tan hell. three wtf is with the appaantly stolen sprites of that blue wizard with teh fireball, .. i have wayy too many probs w/ this flash, and btw, WAKE UP FROM YOUR ANIME FANTASY WORLD TO FACE REAL LIFE!
KaiBlade responds:
thanks you this helped me alot got me thinking on the story ad the show so thanks for this rant thanks to you my series i hope to do won't be so bad
good trailer but...
the guy has a see through eye and theres a few spelling mistakes
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