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Nov 16, 2005 | 3:06 AM EST
  • Daily 4th Place November 17, 2005

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UPDATE 060617
I updated a new version with the fantastic voice acting of TripleArrow, Forbin and Johan Bodin,
a special thanks to the Newgrounds voice acting club.

UPDATE 051117
Daily 4th place thank you all NG users!
I updated the file and fixed the misspellings for most of the movie(i hope) and thanks for all the help I have got from you all.

In this part there are more story elements but still som action, and I like to thank everyone who review the other two parts it really helps and keeps me going...

You can find the other parts here:
newgrounds.com/portal/vi
ew/255366
newgrounds.com/portal/vi
ew/267172

I hope you all enjoy it, and please review

The voices may be slight strange cause I useda a pretty old mic for recording and I coulden't get any one to do the voices so I had to do them and I do suck at voice acting, big time... another issue I had was the subtitle, they just dident want go stay the same and I tried my best with the spelling.... other than this I hope you all like it!

Reviews


colinmooncolinmoon

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 17, 2005

An interesing piece of a bigger whole?

This is terrifying on so many levels--this looks like a good series to watch alone in the dark; my only problems are that the voice-overs are too quiet against the music, the dialogue seems jerky and unnatural ("how in the hell we stop it" would be better said "how in hell we stop it", for instance), and the fact that you could highly benefit from a spell-checker--the thing is riddled with misspellings and grammer problems. Like 'explotian' is really 'explosion', 'allright' is either 'alright' or 'all right', preferably the first one.

The concept seems scary enough, and I'm going to go watch the other parts now. Good job, but watch out for details.


GrimEntertainment responds:

Thanks glad you liked it, and I will watch out for details for next part, the subtiteling has been somewhat fixed now with the help of a word book (:
Thanks again!


PureShadowPureShadow

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 16, 2005

i think..

the very first part of this is a copy of halo 2..the flood shit..its good but..its more like aliens vs predator..did you get the idea from that and twist it...cus ive seen an alien on one of the container shits


GrimEntertainment responds:

Thans glad you liked it some what! I have actully never played any of the Halo games but so Iam not sure what you mean, but I played the AVP games but Iam not really sure what you mean with it, but there are surly isperation from the AVP game, movie and the Alien series, the alien in the container is a small tribute to one of greatest movie evermade Aliens... Thanks again!