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Naz the fish

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NitroFlash

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Carbo (BreedCrasher)

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Date Submitted

11/13/2005 | 02:21PM EST

File Information

Movie | 2.7 MB

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Current Score

3.21 / 5.00

Score Rank: #44,821
Popularity Rank: #63,220

282 votes | 1,933 views

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Author Comments

It's Short, and i made it with Carbo. And ehh... i made the most of it. Enjoy the Movie!

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Average Score: 7.0 / 10

Score: 7
wolfpackvisual

"Sairin Kata Tsubasa no Tenshi??"

date: November 13, 2005

Hmm - well your flash is nice - but your 3d is amateur. If this is Studio MAX, try using an Atmospheric Aparatus instead of just texturing the sky - there are tons of clouds tutorials and actually RENDERING the clouds looks infinitely better than that texture you had - it looked really flat. The water COULD have been nicer - but at that angle it wasnt really convincing - just a noise map with a flat mirror - doubt it was raytraced.

Lets see - I gave it a 5 - this will proabbly make it and i want a protection point. Sephiroth ?? Hmmmm.

And your intro logo is WAY TOO LONG!!! Shorten that up to ONE WOW - and you'll be totally set - but 'wow' that was on the screen for WAayyy too long.

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Score: 7
jingmeichen

"buhbye food chain!"

date: November 13, 2005

haha. Way to flip the ole food chain. Good enough to stay on Newgrounds.

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Score: 7
ingoguy15

"Good try!"

date: November 13, 2005

Nice work on the graphics! Work on the plot a little more. Also the blood was not very blood-like. You may want to work on it. But all in all it was good enough to stay on newgrounds!

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