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Its a little twisted. Leave some reviews so I can get a decent critique off this. thanks <3
Thanks for the reviews so Far. You've been helpful. keep 'em comin
((( DECENT )))
This was sorta neat, i really like what you done with the character and all, very neat and the "BLOOD" from the eye was cool and really good use of color like his body, the head was abit odd but still was a neat character, nice job, keep it up...
It's alright, but the stick arms...
Since I didn't notice the leg move much....
-When doing parented charecters, you can make the inking lines invisible by draging the mouse over the desired portion on the symbol peice (say where the upper arm and lower arm symbols would meet to make the elbow) and either changing the ink color there to match the paint color, or setting the alpha of the color to 0 in the color mixer window. this will make the symbols look seamless when done right. I'm not sure if this was the reason stick arms were used or not though (since the other parented peices didn't seem to have or need joints.)
-Nice blood btw.
yup it was twisted alright
to me it was just another emo film. the graphics were pretty good but try no to use sticks for arms
The animation was really good but it got repeditive. If you added different types of scenes it would get a much higher score. But you should definitly keep the good work up
Thanks much! I'll be sure to make the next one less repetitive. All you guys are being so helpful <3
i agree it is repetitive but some creepy kid up here on newgrounds at some point is going to like it..plus we need more music videos up here...
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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