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Fixed so that it has a picture.
This two and a half toon is about my fear of foolishly commiting suicide. It is my first flash and first NG submission. Please critize. Don't hold back.
Could you turn up the angst a bit more?
How original "i feel teh sadness nao i must diiieee". The subject of suicide alone does not deep philosophy make. My worst fear is someone is going to watch and go "omgz, i do not understand therefore it must be deep and meaningful, i shud think about wat it meens1". Here's a clue in: If a subject is confusing or appears to make little sense it doesn't automatically make it profound, it means the presenter didn't do enough to explain it. If there's a real message in this movie I'm missing it and only seeing a five minute angst fest and I'm sure a lot of others are getting the same impression. Next time try coming up with a message before hand and focusing on making it at clear as possible in your production. On the other hand if you're just venting your sadness or something I don't want to hear or watch about it. Next.
the grapics were actully ok but theres no interactivityand overall i give it a 6 pretty good.
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Ah... a hard-hitting psychodrama, as written by Snoopy.
In the movie 'Arthur', Dudley Moore says: "Not everybody who drinks is a poet. Some of us drink because we're not poets." And I guess some of us make animations.
The image of 'red drops of vitality falling into a black sea' would be poetic if it had any relationship to reality, or any deeper meaning beyond "ooh, isn't *this* a powerful image".
I actually thought the hand-drawn graphics were kinda evocative; with more work, this could be a good piece of animation. It just tries to be something it isn't: art.
WEll... THAT REALLY KINDA SUCKED.
Don't go crazy and leap off a cliff because everyone hates yur flash, ok? this really does have to get blammed, so no hard feelings. It could have been okay if you hadn't done hand-drawn animation, and the character hadn't looked so ridiculous. I hope that's not really what you look like. : P
Listen pal, for the last goddam time, and i dont why people have been thinking this, but this movie is not about me wanting to commit suicide. ITS CALLED "WORST FEAR" cuz i fear being foolish and doing that! It sez that right in the commentary!
...not really any need to critisize
you did a good enough job of making it look bad :)
you could make a wonderful ballarina if you can really stand on your toes like that!
um... dont kill your self though
even if you live somewhere there's a cliff :/
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