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Pretus Part 1

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Nov 5, 2005 | 4:43 AM EST

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yes its realy good and its the first movie i have submit.

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JokersbellJokersbell

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

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Pretty good. Nice first submission.



bernodus3bernodus3

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow

its cool and nice sprites..youre cool.



pasvupasprispasvupaspris

Rated 2 / 5 stars

quite good for a 1st

the story has no real sense, work on a better introduction,
and the fights are quite uninteresting plus the text must be better
be it's not ugly as usual for a first anim
well keep working and maybe you could do some good nice things for the future


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RSQViperRSQViper

Rated 1 / 5 stars

You Need to Edit

Your editing is not good at all and it shows. All kinds of mispelled words. There's really no excuse when it's as simple as sending your file to another person to help you out and check your work.

The animation was descent though so if you got your editing down you would make decent Flash.


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nato7nato7

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Learn how to spell.

Seriously, you might think that abbreviations are easier to read, they aren't. So, unless you can spell, you should include dialogued sound.

Aside from this, the movie was decent. It was well animated and creative. Also the storyline was ok. Although, at times I was confused at what it was. Probably reflected in the subtitles, poorly spelled words in the subtitles. :P

Good job and please don't take offence to my oneline summary on the top.
Thanks.


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