Score: 7
"Needs a bit of improvement, but has promise :)"
date: November 4, 2005
I can see you have put a lot of effort into this work, with more practice, and better recording equipment, you could make some good work out of this.
I noticed a lot of distortion and feedback from your audio, this may either be from a low-quality microphone, you having the mic too close to your mouth or simply talking too loud.
Lip Synch isn't too bad, but needs improvement.
Artwork isn't too bad, but needs a bit more work. Did you do the graphics totally via computer? If you have a scanner you could always sketch the drawings by hand and do final editings on your computer.
All in all, this has promise, if you keep practicing. :)
Author's Response:
why don't you tell that to the real mortal kombat... lol!
