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If u dont understand, watch ep.1 and 2. Basically 1 and 2 and 3 are just a battle.
This was rly good!
This was pretty awsome, u make some rly good animated stuff!
holy shit, one winged angel
thats all it needs to get a 5/5 from me every day, even if you did put crap over half of it
That was a very metaphorical battle - it's done very well. The music is cool, and it adds to the mood.
But a couple of pointers.
1. Why the hell doesn't anyone have a face?? How are you gonna do the plot? How will you distinguish the characters?
2. Why isn't there any dialogue?
3. It's not understandable - the battle is great and all, but things are totally outta proportion...looks like a DBZ style kind of fighting...you gotta make the actiosn more clear.
Otherwise, great job. It's L33T. Keep it up.
obvious talent here...but
you need to add some coherence to your flash animations man......ive wtached the other 2 aswell but none of them are drawn enough or explained enough to show any kind of story or coherence, pretty much DBZ type of fighting with a more serious look to it, good but use your talent to make something better, instead of all the small and quick flashes of actions
but i can see where the lower score comes from. it is slightly confusing at times as to what specifically is going on. i know YOU know, but sometimes it doesn't come across as well to the audience. also, it is just a little bit slow for NG. i don't mind the pace, but this is not a captive audience. don't let that bother you though, just accept the lower score and don't let it affect your series.
If i tell u tat it doesnt bother me at all, then it is a lie. The score actually discouraged me alot but eventually i have begining to learn to accept it.
Actually i should be happy that my flash is being seen by lots of pple and i have also received alots of great reviews so i will still be continuing the series!!
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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