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Nov 2, 2005 | 9:24 PM EST
  • Daily 4th Place November 4, 2005

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If u dont understand, watch ep.1 and 2. Basically 1 and 2 and 3 are just a battle.

Reviews


OtembarOtembar

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 19, 2007

This was rly good!

This was pretty awsome, u make some rly good animated stuff!



911840911840

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 23, 2006

holy shit, one winged angel

thats all it needs to get a 5/5 from me every day, even if you did put crap over half of it



MilitaryGenera1MilitaryGenera1

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 28, 2005

-=(Superb)=-

That was a very metaphorical battle - it's done very well. The music is cool, and it adds to the mood.
But a couple of pointers.
1. Why the hell doesn't anyone have a face?? How are you gonna do the plot? How will you distinguish the characters?
2. Why isn't there any dialogue?
3. It's not understandable - the battle is great and all, but things are totally outta proportion...looks like a DBZ style kind of fighting...you gotta make the actiosn more clear.

Otherwise, great job. It's L33T. Keep it up.



NightScope6NightScope6

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 7, 2005

obvious talent here...but

you need to add some coherence to your flash animations man......ive wtached the other 2 aswell but none of them are drawn enough or explained enough to show any kind of story or coherence, pretty much DBZ type of fighting with a more serious look to it, good but use your talent to make something better, instead of all the small and quick flashes of actions



FR0GSFR0GS

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 6, 2005

good

but i can see where the lower score comes from. it is slightly confusing at times as to what specifically is going on. i know YOU know, but sometimes it doesn't come across as well to the audience. also, it is just a little bit slow for NG. i don't mind the pace, but this is not a captive audience. don't let that bother you though, just accept the lower score and don't let it affect your series.


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Black-Crystal responds:

If i tell u tat it doesnt bother me at all, then it is a lie. The score actually discouraged me alot but eventually i have begining to learn to accept it.
Actually i should be happy that my flash is being seen by lots of pple and i have also received alots of great reviews so i will still be continuing the series!!