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You should spend more time on these.
I think you should spend alot more time on your flashes. If you plan to make a movie every day, it's probably not gonna work. I used to make downloadable video games, and i made one every week, and they all sucked ass cos they were like only one level long and stuff, so i decided to spend more time on them and they ended up ok.
So, if you're making a n00bkbob#8, you should spend a couple of weeks on it to perfect some awesome jokes and neat looking games then put them all in an awesome collection. That'd be ace.
Good luck and I look forward to seeing your next work ;o)
this is how a review is supposed to look :)
you are completely right, and we are gonna spend more time on each from now on, not weeks, but more than one a day(that is way to fast)
good, but episode 6 is still the pwn
it was a good try but you need to wotk on some of the sound and graphics. Matbe use sprites
agreed... but not sprites
take some more time on these
instead of bringing out these every couple of days. take longer on them. the graphics could do with serious work and the animation isn't too good either, you cant critise people that give you negative reviews just because they haven't made cartoons either, is newgrounds only for people that make flash? you made it to be reviewed by the public and he/she is the public and he actually gave you something constructive to think about.
no he didnt give any constructive critisism. he was just being an ass.
and yes, this part was a new low-point.
from now on atleast i(n00bqueen) will take more time on my parts.
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