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halloween is meant to be scary but this isn't!! it also isn't funny...don't watch it if you like yourself because you probably won't by the end of this
Wow you seem so unproductive...
yet you squeek this in. Good job joesefina. Rather than leave you the typical glowing review like a good friend ill leave a harsh and honest one.
Well actually i liked it, your animation is really getting alot better. I did notice the quality take a slant as the movie progressed though... either you were running thin on time or cutting corners but i did manage to notice it.
Your camera angles sometimes were kind of boring.. specially on the pumpkin part, again its probably lack of time im guessing but a really exciting scene managedto seem kind of dull. I suggest taking a glance at Mindchambers pico unloaded flick.. its got a good helping of carefully chosen camera angles to maximize the excitement of a character dealing with multiple enemies at once.
Your typography, (yes i am a big nerd that notices that) is excellent. I have no complaints there, you have great design instincts and even your credits are appealing to sit through.
I know you are having some technical issues with synching of audio with speech but even still i noticed that the mouth movements chosen arent always the most effective ones.
Your pal Tommo is particularly good at that, may want to chat it up with him and maybe get some pointers on that... other than that good job. I wish i could have been harsher but its a fairly solid episode ... dont go overboard on flash filters!!
Smash Smash Smash
W.. Wait.. thoes wern't normal pumpkins..
loved it.. great way to end off hollows eve
I just love it!!!
Today theres a lots of crap about flash movie... But this one is really worh the time to watch it... :D, I love the animation, you must work like some month to do this :P:P, anyway, 10 everywere...
Wow, there was action in this one. XD
"Ah, Gordon Freeman" = Gold.
I miss big-eyed style though, in this style Dans mouth looks... huge. o_o
Call me ;o;
yeah, I should work a way around the mouths being different sizes every scene. It's just because I do the LS in a graphic...then add it all in at the end.
Don't get me wrong, I liked the flash a lot. The animation was great, and the voices were good as well. It was fairly humorous, too. The only fault lies in the length of the flash. Just expand on this, and you'll have one hell of a Halloween flash.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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