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Oct 30, 2005 | 10:52 AM EST

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the surviving tape of a story entailing mysterious deaths; no trace, no bodies.

30 october 2005.

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TheWookieeTheWookiee

Rated 1 / 5 stars October 30, 2005

good lord >_>

Im a pretty fast reader, but the text went away too fast. Couldnt understand much that you said either. Or who that dude was when he popped up out of nowwhere...It needs alot of work



GurdixGurdix

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 30, 2005

way to short, and what were they saying anyway....

way to short, and what were they saying anyway. it was too short for me too give it any really good marks



SpikemanSpikeman

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars October 30, 2005

Try getting a microphone

I could barely understand what your characters were saying. I can;t even see what they are. The text in the beginning goes just a little bit too fast.