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Oct 30, 2005 | 4:24 AM EST

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Author Comments

This is my first serious flash movie, i would like to know if anybody has any sugestions of what i can improve.
Thanks
Saminator

Reviews


Lard-ladLard-lad

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good but not long enough

Not bad for a first "seroius" flash movie, but could do with a bit more humour, violence or length to make it stand out more. Interesting.



sid17sid17

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's ok

this is sid17 nicknamed DAN G, remember that, DAN G, m8, and I'm just gonna say that all those things I said about you being good at flash, I take them back. Joke. Kinda short tho, even tho mine could never be better :(



ElnemElnem

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty good.

I liked the way it was done, and I thought it was entertaining to watch except there are a few things that I think could be improved: the sound quality and the length of the movie. Other than that, pretty good.


Saminator responds:

Thanks m8, it's the fist one i've done, i'll try and make future movies longer


ChavDalekProductionsChavDalekProductions

Rated 5 / 5 stars

cool

i know how to edit stuff into quicktime files sam. Email me, you have my address.


Saminator responds:

cheers jamjam


decafdecaf

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad!

If you do more stuff like this, just remember to spend more time on it making it longer - it's better to have 1 good, long movie than 3 short, worse ones.

But otherwise, it's not bad.


Saminator responds:

Thank you, i'll try to bear that in mind