Score: 7
"*stunned*"
date: March 10, 2006
It was full of action and no dull breaks, I gotta give you credit for that.
I thought how the grocery store blew up was pretty funny, I totally didn't expect that and kinda made me jump a little in my seat.
The two guys talking in the field I thought wa skinda interesting, like I actually wanted it to continue because .... I dunno I liked it?
Anyway good work with this, you definately have a creative mind and can offer something to NG that not many other people can. 3/5.
btw my gost name is "happybuttgost" <-- lucky me. =)
Author's Response:
WHO THE HELL ARE YOU
