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Here is an animation I'm quite proud of, probably my best so far. Hopefully part 2 will be made and won't just be left as another "to be continued because I can't be arsed" movie.
It's taken quite a while, about a month to make because I've been working on it, on and off.
Well I hope you enjoy, and I'm open to any criticism. =D
If there's anything you think I should work on or just some comments send them to: firstname.lastname@example.org
That was brilliant great 3D effects also... MAKE ANOTHER ONE!!!!
the 3D, the fighting, the style, everything was almost perfect. i noticed you got swift 3D ALSO. BUT that doesn't matter, every good work for u, i agree that theis movie should get a 9+ but the rating is only 8.5, man everybody i see in NEWGROUNDS all rate movies(that are sticks) so low. well, there is nothing i can do for u. i only can review it , vote it, and support it. i hope your other movies can have a beter rating score. btw, i saw plain fight 4, its was also excellent, and it got a 9+/10. i hope this movie can also get a 9+. sooo i guess............. for u to keep up this wonderful work piece :)
What the hell is cohession?
Okay, I will satrt with the sound. The songs you choose, while they are pretty good, did not fit the movie at all. The first song that came in while loading up the truck gave the rest away too much. It seemed like you just randomly inserted it. Then it went silent, a few gunshots later and pull harder comes on. WTF? Trivium are a great band, but your timing is awful and they do not fit the movie.
As for the graphics, My advise is not to try 3d till you improve. What was actually flash work was better than what most do for stickmen. However, stick drawings are a bit limiting and you should aim to draw real people
The movie itself had very little plot, And it made no sense whatsoever, just 'theres some war on, and well, its 2013, then 2023, then 2013, then 2023 again, then 12 years before that.
And you had me lost within 20 seconds.
Really, you lack one thing: Cohession.
Your movie seems like a load of scenes thrown together, with random changes in drawing style and music. It just seems just too random for any sense to come of it.
My advice is the following:
1. Stick to one movie style
2. Don't just insert songs in. Its not about having a cool soundtrack, its about having one that fits
3. Don't tell your plot in 20 seconds in a monologue.
4. Try not to be cliche
This movie was terrible due to its total lack of cohession. I hope you know what it means.
that was really good, i liked it, the 3d scenes could have been better but overall it was very good. and considering you say your not good at graphics, these were pretty good, well done, im hoping that you will make the next part... 4/5
Definatly worth watching.
This was definatly worth watching, i really liked it, and im looking forward to see the next part. Some of the 3d scenes could've used some better backgrounds though, and some things was missing.
Else, Great job, keep it up!
Thanks, yeah this was my first attempt at 3d, thanks for the review
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