For a first movie it is really good.

For a first movie this is good. What I understand Smiggo´s situation is hopless, ( I mean if you jump from the 4rd floor u die) so the story is predictable. But still the author surprise the viewer with his humor and at the end watch for an opportunity to astonish the audience. At the end I fell in my mouth, a sense of blood. Maybe the story reflect the cynic society today?

Sorry...no.

You had a good idea at first...but it was just...too dumb. That high-pitched noise while the type appeared...ugh. Annoying as hell. Coulda been longer with more of a point or more development, and it might have been more interesting.

Hehe that was awesome

not exactly front page material or Daily Feat material but add more options at the menu and make something that will make him survive also tighten up the graphics and ur in good shape but it wasn't to long or to short it was just right.

~Old_Style_Clock

nice

i liked it, the next one could do with some work, like making it longer, more options and changing the text noise (really annoying beeping isnt great) but a good start nevertheless. keep it up!

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I still dont get it, why did it go over the edge?

Err... not bad flash keep going