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Very cute but also very short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was a really small {FILE} ok so as the film starts playing it gets good with a sheep and some aliens im guessing the aliens changed the sheep and now the sheep is confused and doesnt know what to do, now this is cite but still very {SHORT} and another issue is that it loops and thats due to the fact that you need to add a {STOP-ACTION} code, also it being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short. so this started out ok good animating good color and an overall start to a good story but just ended too shortly, so with all that said you should put abit more effort next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated above add more short toons or make this one longer with more to see and such, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash, other then that its a pretty good start.

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation funny but just plain too short.

A good try but disapointing

Well it wasn't obviously made to have high standards but at the time this was somewhat entertaining. Sadly though it doesn't seem to live up to todays standards. But it's still an interesting find anyways.

well

The drawings are good, but the animation itself seems a bit lacking, both in terms of detailed movement, and in terms of length. The addition of sound would probably help too maybe narration as well to let people know exactly whats happening at the end there.

-[Epic Review Quest Review]-

I see, a sheep getting abducted. And a cow got abducted a few 10x submissions back....

meh

the good:
the graphics look decent and the animations aren't that bad.
also, you had a plot. a thing not many flash artists seem to include into their flashes nowadays...

the bad:
but the animations could have used some more effort. the sheep could have at least moved its legs while running.
the lack of sound hurt this movie a lot.

the ugly:
this is a nice little flash movie, but with just some more effort this could have been much better. just add sound to it and i am sure you will get a better score.
then, work on the animations a little more (the sheep should move its legs) and try to make it a bit longer. maybe a little scene inside the ufo - or something similair - to add some more content.