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Inspired after i finished reading Michael Crichton's "The Andromeda Strain"
This project also took me one day to complete, so im quite proud of what ive produced.
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Well not sure what to say with this, it does sound good and has some interest fro me anyways, but i do think that there is too much Text info its mostly that anyways, may turn away some users who just want to see visuals, nice idea though...
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More visuals then text...
Neat story base but lacks visuals...
i cant help it that i seen this before. it alsmost looks like the same as the another one. i cant find it cuz it might been blamed and it was a long time ago like a year. so i cant prove that you copied it or re-submit it.
The other one was mine. I had wrongly whistled flash, so i made a new account. The other Andromeda has been removed now, by me. Thnxs anyway.
Good story, great potential
It was a nice flash and a great idea for a storyline.
The things I didnt liked in this flash was the text log part (you could just show they talking on the monitor or some flashbacks showing what they-re saying) and the infection part (that shape animation sucked badly). This 2 things take most of the animation. The rest was very nice (i loved the landing and crash part). The sound was just a loop and no sound effect, but at least it has to do with the animation.
Although it isnt very original, the story was great. You just should spend more than 1 day developing it :P.
But i dont agree that the chances are of we get infected by an alien virus.
1st, the virus wasnt developed in our ecosystem, so the chances that its incompatiple with our biology and our environment is too great.
2nd, a virus must have a balance of time beetween infection and death of host, so it can multiply more effectively. A virus that kill very fast generally dont spread too fast. Unless its transmission is highly effective (by air). If thats the case the virus must be adapted to live in our air.
Well, it was just my thoughts and it didn't influenced in my score.
Read the book!
Nice job, great flash
I wasn't entirely sure what was happening with the virus though, wasn't sure if the people were dying or becoming enlightened. Also you might try to break up the long section of text, it was interesting but not the same as graphics.
Very well made video of a very good book
The video had many very well animated segments and it followed the plot of the book very well. My one large problem with your movie is that you spent far too much time simply displaying words and then you did not animate the deaths of the people. I had been expecting the outline people to die, not fill with green. All in all it could use a little work but it was a good piece.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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