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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
10/11/05 – 04/29/08
Well this is a small cartoon about the small robot GIR from the popular Invader Zim cartoon. The voices are bad becouse I used Talk IT! to make him talk so he doesn't talk like in the cartoons but like a old fashined robot.
For a first animation i quite enjoyed that, well done.
It was all right, the graphics were really good, but the good stops there.
The voice was HORRIBLE. There are so many sites on the internet that have GIR voices that you could use as opposed to that hallow, not good one. Second, GIR doesn't use fowl language, or and dirty humor, and that's why he is so great.
Try making your OWN original character, stealing a Johnen Vasquez character equals no.
That was mega funny! I reckon you should make more gir cartoons, but try and get a more Gir-ish voice from somewhere.
Zim: WHY DID YOU REMOVE THE CONTROLLER UNIT GIR???
Gir: Make room for the muffins!
Man, it's obvious you have a lot of talent which could be put into making some classic flash. This wasn't really very good though, in terms of concept and script etc. I assume the main purpose of this animation was so you could experiment with flash. If you create something original and cool/funny I think you'd have a chance of getting front page. Good animation.
you need to reinstall flash or something,because even on high quality your lines look screwed up,and you need a voice actor who can do gir,not some crappy robotic voice,other than that it's decent. the small amount of dialogue was a bit funny I guess..
Well first of all that sounded nothing like gir.
Second work on the sound, not just a little but a lot.
After that is done then come up with a better story line I didn't blam this one because it's your first flash submit but I'll blam the next trash pile if doesn't come with bearable sound and has some story line.
I thought that was great!! I couldn't understand what the preloader said, but the rest was okay. This was a great vid for a shorty. I hope you make more movies like this!!
this flash really sucked. the voice of the character didn't even match the voice in the show! this really was bad animation.
Great animation however the voice is how can i put this *not very good*, animation superb, i gave it 10 for style as it is something others havent tried to do i mean how many animators do you see doing a GIR animation exactly ZERO. great work however instead of that rubbish robot voice try to find someone that can inpersonate GIR well.
One last thing "IM DANCING LIKE A MONKEY" lmao GIR IS FUCKING COOL
Eh, the voice didn't sound relatively like gir. At all. It sounded more like the efficient robots that other invaders were given. Most of the voices were out of synch, and it wasn't so funny ...
I look forward to seeing more animations from you, and I hope you can create a better flash next time =) !
but not good enough sorry i thought the animation was pretty good but the voice got annoying quickly and it wasn't funny at all ...try to make it longer and more plot next time
i liked the art, and i really like invader zim, but i didnt like the qualty of the flash, there was no diffrence form low to high and also the story sucked... next time work a little harder on your story
How about YOU go fuck yourself?
p.s. If this is how you make flash, I hope this is the ONLY flash submission you do.
You insulte gir i am a loyal gir fan if you are so stupid to make fun of gir I will blow your brains out whith my gir loveing mob
Well for a frist submission it wasn't that bad but maybe get voice actors to spice it up a little monotone charaters suck...but other than that it was grand.
Not bad for a first-timer, but you really need to get rid of that robot voice- GIR's voice has a higher pitch than that.
You discrace GIR in the most possible form. The voices are fuckign horrible; GIR's voice is extremly high, try to do better. You speakonia instead.
"somwhere, the creator of invader zim is crying..."
That was the biggest peice of crap ive seen since i last saw a clock submission. and they suck. badly.
Heres some things you could do
1. GIR's voice should be HIGH DAMNIT!
2. Make his tone and mode of speaking more whimscial, GIR isint at all logical, and is a poor excuse for a robot.
3. Maybe watch some INVADER ZIM. Its a good show, and will give you examples of how GIR acts.
this is the biggest piece of shit ive ever seen
watch some fuckin invader zim dumbass
PTOOO! I spit on you and your HORRIFIC rendition of GIR. I hope J.V. accidentally stumbles across this putrid pile of sh#t you turned his work into, hunts you down and guts you with your own harddrive so not only would the world be rid of you, but assured that you would never make another horrible excuse for a flash animation like this ever again!
Looool that rocked! (not much, but it did!)
Ps : Voice simulator just suck ass!!!
Then you've got potential. the voice was a small bit irritating, but I have no room to talk because I use computer voices too. Soo.. yeah.
Anyway, work at it. Because like I said, you've got potential. This wasn't AWESOME, but it was good.
Keep it up.
-NMC
heh what you could do use get a mic and jack it into the back of your comp and record your own voice then tweak it a little eheheh but um this is kinda ok. wont be brutal to this cuz its your first and this is good for your first thing ever good work : ) try to make somthing more intresting next time thow k.
But really, what is that talk thing! I can't find it anywhere...
It might have been funny if there was real voices instead of those annoying robo ones. You have potential, just ditch those voices man.
you could have just re tuned your voice to make it high pitched like gir's....voice...that voice was extreamly annoying and hard to listen to...also, gir's anntena...or what ever, the thing that's on his head, does not jiggle when he walks, but good effort to make it do something it doesn't! :) this is alot better than some flashes unfortunantly...i can't beleive it...
(1) I HATE THIS VOICE IT CREEPS ME OUT!
(2) GIR is stupid in the show
(3) tweak that voic to make it higher
The beginning was very funny. I think Gir's voice should've been a little bit higher though. But all above it was very kewl. :D
girs voice was kind of off...but it was good
that was really good (^^) sho cute too!!
the voice sucked, u avoided one of the reasons we like gir, his loud screecky voice.
my ending statement judge? YOU GOT ANY OF THEM TAQUITOES?!
you are obviously a person that believes that they r funny when everyone else thinks that u r an idiot. nothing in that cartoon had any relivance to invader Zim in any way other than the fact that u used a poorly drawn gir. it sucked and was a waste of 5 minutes of my life please dont to any more crap like this.
"uuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmm..........................."
was THAT sopposed 2 b good. ur a disgrace 2 gir.he sounds nothin like him and ur wat ever it was looked nothin like gir.
next time dont embarras ur self!!!>(
ok i wont b mean. concept wise, it cud have been good. using girs actual voice cud have made it funny. i commend u fer trying though
wtf?this cartoon is pathetic the sound sound nothing like gir and gir does not have a brain and besides its about him getting rust i mean thats stupid here are some tips:1.make the sound sound better or sound like the character
2.try and do the graphics better
3.make the animation a little longer
i hope some of these tips are helpful but still heres something at the begining on what you said people might not wanna watch it either way do not do that im sorry if this makes you feel bad but its the truth
Ok... Not sure what to say...
Ok hello, first off Gir dose not have a brain dumbass, and second, Gir may act dumb, but that was just plain mean.
it was ok but telling people to "go fuck your self if you dont like it" is not a good way to get fans
... wah... wah ... er..
why? why would you do that? make it yeah sure .. maybe your proud of it .. but thats because you made it you have to be ... this cartoon is like your gay son .. you have to be suportive of it .. but dont be sending stuff like this in ... invader zim the holy grail of cancled cartoons so dont be knocking it with this .. thing?
Dispite the warnings of the voice overs I saw on the author's notes of the cartoon I still ended up disillusioned by the cartoon. I'm a huge fan of GIR and to be honest this really didn't do that character much justice. The plot was almost there, but it's missing something. It sorta seemed as if it's not quite GIR's character.
It sucked, girs voise didn't sound anything like him, and gir doesn't cuss either. whats wrong with you! it made GIR look bad. It sucked!
Improve
Improve the quality of GIR or whatever his name is. The sound was deep and crappy. Get some real voice acting and make him curse a lot (if he does curse a lot, I just read it off of someones review that he curses a lot) It wasn't funny and I didn't know what was going on. Plz re-do this
The graphics on the couch was the only good thing.
2/5
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that was an alright animation.... a little bit short, but your efforts were nice. i think that for your future flashwork, you should make them longer... it could definitely help you get better results.
I thought it was funny (as I often find things). It was too short and Gir didn't sound like Gir from the invader zim show. and i don't think gir would say "Go fuck your self".
Didn't like the 'intro'. Walking motion seemed overly slow and if you're using a pre-existing character, it seems you should keep him 'in character'.
In the main movie, there were no backgrounds to speak of and all the visual elements were sparse.
The end made me chuckle a bit though.
As I can see from your previous reviews, the voices killed you on this game. However, I won't be as abusive as some of the previous reviewers. Lets just say you could have put just a little more time into it. And I am, of course, putting into consideration that this is your first flash. Problem is you cannot just work on a PS3 game, for example, for 2 days and just because you're too lazy to put the extra time in to put in the effort, you send out a crappy game. EVEN if your next game was amazing, nobody would trust to buy from you since you were so lazy with the first one. First impressions are everything.
I am really really sorry but Gir's voice was GOD AWFUL! That's all.
Hey, it wasn't THA bad, as other people have described it. Their reviews turned out to be overly exaggerated. I, for one, respect that this is your first flash and that you used talk it! for GIR's voice. It wasn't that funny though, and do try to find a better voice for GIR next time around.
I would call this an insult to invader zim. Use your own voice instead. It would sound alot better.
I guess I'm gonna have to go fuck myself then.
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This peice was horrible!!!
I think I have said enough about it.
Nikko
please work more on your animating practice before posting something of such poor quality.
bad voice and animation and also u killed gir evillll
Wow, that was really sad. You messed up the voice and just everything about Gir..please get the animation and voice down better next time.
Why did you make gir die , Lip syncing was bad , try and make girs voice more hi - pitched next time.
right when Gir said "HALLO." I could not stand to watch the rest.
This left a disgusting taste in my mouth. Have you even watched Invader Zim. And NO, I will not fuck myself!
SO LET IT STAY!
if your going to send a pice of shit robot out that says go "F*** your self"F*** that! of corse i wont like it . When he said click play i said F*** that!
Hear are the problems:
The sound was so off to the origanal carecter,
there was no story line if its going to be a series,
there was also no seting just a chair floting in the darkness,
gir was 2 tall and skinny!!!!!!!!!!
OVERAL SCORE: needs a LOT of improvment!!!
Needs improvement..BADLY!!! he needs a SUPER diffrent voice,and..well,the one below me said the rest ^_^
look if your gonna make a bad flash dont make it about a cartoon thats kinda famous because it will suck. the voice was so off i nearly turned it off nut im a huge zim fan so i thought you might do a spoof on an actual episode, nope you made gir rust how f**ing boring first of all. like it says 2 below me no backround no story line poor animation of character and btw his eyes are usually green not blue tart
W.....T......F.....
THE WORST THING EVER!!!!!! THE VOICE DOESN'T SOUND ANYTHING LIKE GIR!!!THEN IT TOLD ME TO GO F*** MYSELF!! THE PERSON WHO MADE THIS SHOULD BE SUED!
Yo
NEVER EVER MAKE A MOVIE AGAIN
IM SRY
BUT WOW
NO MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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what... happened?!