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This was going to be a silent movie, but then i thought that it would need sound.So i put that in.
I dont think this sucks, but thats for you great reviewers out there to decide.
It took me ages to do it, however, i liked it.
Thanks, Hope you enjoy.
there were a couple of spelling mistakes and quite a couple of the subtitles went offscreen, i guess only things to improve on are maybe the graphics, add some music in and possible give them voices
( yes i know it was meant to be a semi-silent movie)
still it was pretty good!
Not bad at all.. But need a little more work.
Yeah I liked it very much , Though the storyline you used is very very un-original becouse its the 7th submission I see with a guy that owns money to someone else and goes on a killing spree... Well I hope Part 2 goes better Tho I don't know where it is gone
I think you should make the backgrounds more detailed and maybe better sound effects to make up for the quality...
And less talking.. I think you should have voices instead of text, Makes it faster and smoother.
Speaking of smoother I don't think the animation is too perfect , But overall you did a very nice try.
The graphics and sounds were pretty basic, but it has a lot of things going for it (that many movies don't!), an example being: length and a storyline.
Though this movie wasn't massively exciting/entertaining, it was good enough to get a 3/5 vote from me!
Not a bad stick story
Graphics and sounds were basic, but it has a lot of things that many movies don't, like length and a storyline. Wasn't massively exciting, but was good enough to get a five from me.
Didn't do it for me...
Sorry but the plot was weak, not enough sounds, horrible grammer and spelling errors. Plus where the hell did he get that rocket launcher from?
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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