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Really short, kinda silly. Might make you giggle, but don't expect to actually laugh -NY Times
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Hmmm well it was ok but needs much more then what you have there, just too little and too
large in file for the content, also the topic matter was abit iffy, just not enough time
went into this, better luck next time...
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Well make it longer, and more humor more jokes, just something to make the viewers intersted in it...
It lacks detail time and effort, but is a start in the right direction, keep at it...
more work i jus say =)
im not going to be evil and just say bad stuff just the old fastion thruufh...
Graphics ; you defnetly are good but shure ned a lithe more work.
Style ; Doe its okay..its your style you know....
Sound ; It was wery low so i allmost had to have the hige'st volyme on my speakers ^^....sorry to say that buts the thruth...
violence ; no mutch..exept for the mooning thing that acctuly was funny doe...
Interactivity ; None....
Humor ; well..gotta work a lithle more whit that one to..its goota make some more sense then that.. ^^.... i guess..
Overall ; More more work and more humor... Im sorry but i need more that that to like it ...it needs mutch and something special to make me laugther i can say...Doe..many peaople has allready done the jesus thing you know ;)....
id repeat the subject, but it speaks for itself the first time quite loudly! i couldnt be any happier with my word selection!
heh, it was kind of silly
not bad, i enjoyed it.
Hey, not bad for a first flash on NG. I myself am working on a couple animations, nothing posted up yet. Good to see there are other from around here. I myself live in Arcata. Hope to see more of your work.
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