Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
A meanigful look at your life is what you're going to get when you experience this flash... it gets right to the point and shows u why you are worth a damn
((( I LIKE THE IDEA )))
I liked the idea and what your going for, but it needs more time and effort especialy on the graphics side of it, by adding some detail and little things here and there would improve on this, nice idea though keep at it...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work on the graphics, more detail and effects...
A neat idea for a flash just lacked time and effort...
Oompa oompa doopty doo....
Graphics sucked, Style lacked, sound was decent, no violence, and no humor.
Looks like everything was done on mspaint, while you where watching Willy wonka and the chocolate factory. I was expecting a small orange guy to pop out. But thats a nice message you where sending everything, suicide is pointless. Next time, spend a little more than 10 minutes on the flash.
Nice message, bad animation.
The message is worthwile. But this is the worse animation I've seen on NG! The high overall score is for the theme of this short. NEVER let anyone influence you to kill yourself....unless you're a rapist, murderer or other similar type of person. Having had thoughts of suicide, I can tell you it's never as bad as you think. there are options; sometimes you just have to look harder for them.
I've been on that edge
And I walked back down instead of jumping. I'm glad I did, since I wouldn't be writing this review otherwise.
The artwork was the weak point of this movie. Still, though, I really appreciated the message. Especially on Newgrounds, where the average message is "you suck." I can't cound the number of times I've seen "kill yourself now" in a review. It was good to hear the opposite message for once.
if i were to ever think about killing myself that would scare me away from it. effective but could of had better graphics. good job.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.