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Here's a short stop-motion piece I did for my class. Not really a FLASH animation per se, but still... soo... tell me what you guys think.
music: "Another" by Matthew Dear
((( IT WAS INTERESTING )))
This was neat, you dont get to see these everyday but it seemed abit on the shortside, but still had a good sorta naimation to it, i like it, just needs more to it...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more stuff going on...
A short stop-motion, could be better though...
it was good for a stop-motion animation. a bit random overall, but it was pretty cool to watch and i liked the graphics in this one. the choice of audio was alright too, not my favorite music, but it was still cool.
Not bad, not good. I just don't get the plot if there's one. Animation was good, but could be improved like the rest.
I know the amount of work that goes into a stop motion film (Alot of pictures, alot of time and alot of harddrive space) So I used that while grading this. (3/5) Even though the smoothness of it all was good, I really.. did not feel as if anything of importance had happened. I didn't chuckle or nod.. or shake my head in disgust. Keep trying my friend, you're skills have room to grow!
I don't get it..
It seems pretty pointless.. and what? I don't see the point of this flash.. try to make it more interesting, like including a better music, or have a storyline at least.. forgive me, but i think this is crap..
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