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Finally decided to put together an animation. I have been sketching on for a while, but I am not entirely satisfied with the end result. Hopefully things will get better with the next episode. Enjoy this as it is.
complete and utter shit
I'm amazed by the great, yet simple storyline. I so wish you'll make this into a series.
That bum in the beginning was quite sloppy made, but that was also the only thing. Amazing work on the backgrounds, loaded with details wherever you looked. Even the hallway was made good. The characters was also niceely drawn. Great voice acting, no swedish accent at all. And i'll have a hard time coming up with these lines.
And if you're interested, we have a Swedish people club in the C&C section of the forum.
Again, great first movie, way better than mine :)
((( HAHA )))
Haha ok this was great funny indeed, abit hard to understand at times with the voices but was still good, and the subtitle was a nice touch, you had some really good backrounds with little stuff like cracks and shadows very good detail, this flashw as great and with lots of humor nice work indeed....
Well, this review gave me a little creativity boost. It is nice to get feedback from a really experienced NG-user. Thanks for noticing!
Now, do remind me......
What exactly was the point of this?
I guess it's a start for a first timer......but hey, keep the crap work at home vs. putting it on a critical site. I understand maybe you want the feedback, but feelings override the brain cells that take the constructive critisim. Better luck next time.
If it makes it any better, I think you have real potential about ya - hope to see you make something out of this.......only.....better.
Good start to your series. Bruno looks like he could be given some depth and development which would lead to all kinds of hilarious situations.
Graphics: Good graphics, the animation could be a little smoother though.
Audio: Bruno needs some kind of accent that changes per episode from each european country to the next. Your voice recording was alright.
Keep up the good work
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