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First episode!~ leave a review...
((( HAS PROMISE )))
Well it has promise, but this was very short, it needed more especialy if it was a first episode, it was neat and had some sharp looking graphics just was to short, make the next one abit longer if you can, anyways nice start...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, more info on what to expect in the next one aswell...
A good start to something that looks good with a decent story and sharp graphics...
Take more time and redo this
Dont rush art.
take some time, and resubmit. becuase this wil defintly get blammed.
yay it didnt BLEH! >=P
WTF?? That's it??
Well...What the hell was the point in this movie?? It is not so great when you make a movie that runs under a half minute, so if you had made it three minutes longer and made some good storyline...It could have been a 7 or 8... But for now, this is not anymore than 3!
ya, it was pretty short, but it was like..an intro..next episode WILL be longer, a lot
you used sprites... and no sound beside the repeating annoying background music.. and there was almost no animation but the sprites moving and text...
the only way to get better is to challenge yourself... and that was not challenging
kk..lol i didnt realise bg music was so bad xD
dont u think is a bit 2short y not make it longer by combining the next 1 as well?? this doesnt tell us much abt it
well..i thought it was a ok intro..it was definetly shot, got it
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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