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This is the first release of blood raven! If you know my other flash, youll know her. terro is in anther flash. but im not submitting it.
Well as you say it's old, and it's easy to notice. It's short, lacks sound, lacks quality graphics . . . but with a little improvement you really could make something out of it. Don't give up yet!
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This was an ok staring but it "LOOPED" youo may want to get that fixed, some ok art but could be detailed abit more, nice flow of animation but again could be better, it was decent...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the looping with a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and add propper play and replay buttons...
Ok animation, but the flash loops, could use some detail all around aswell, notba dthough...
That was really short. the graphics were so-so but there was really no storyline to it.
I'm really sorry, because this is really short and.. well, maybe if you spend some more time on the animation it could at least look good :O
I like the way you painted the wolves, but that was really about it. Sorry :o
Too fast, and it's in an infinite loop, do something about it, it's getting on my nerve! Look like it was going somewhere, then again... it wasn't.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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