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At long last I've finished the second in the series of Magus Bros Shorts. Based on the Captain SNES story-arc of the same name (named by Miranda Shadowind) it shows Magus in his training sessions with Mario.

This one sees Magus being taken on a tour of a ghost house. It's a bit text-heavy, so sorry about that. I don't want to use voices because I've not heard Mario's voice done much justice in the flashes that do use Mario with voices.

The full thing's 7 minutes long, so it's debatable as to whether you can call it a "short" but there's a button alongside the play and pause buttons for you to go to the scene selector at any time.

Hope you enjoy (if not, I don't really care. Can't please everyone after all).

Reviews


LegnaDamLegnaDam

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2005

Great!

Although it could be longer, it was pretty well made ^^ ==b


ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

It's already 7 minutes. o_O Anyway, glad you liked it.


HyperblastXLHyperblastXL

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2005

Nice job..

Kinda slow at some parts, but overall it was a good sprite movie.


ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

Thanks. I do go a bit slow sometimes...


JellysauceJellysauce

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 29, 2005

good story

as my titles says it was a great story, the dialog was pretty good with a great relation ship between magus and mario, it was also a bit funny in there to with the flash back and some other text was ok. The animation was ok, it wasnt anything to rave about it seemed very simple nothing moved that much but it wasnt to bad of animation either, the sound wasnt bad but i wished for voice overs, but the text was easy to read and it stayed on screen just long enough to read it, and the ending was great also, over all it was pretty good.


ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

I'm glad I got the text speed right on this one. Voices I'm still not sure about adding as I've not seen many Mario flashes that have a good voice actor for Mario (then again I'm probably looking at the wrong ones).

I do agree that the animation was a bit simplistic in parts but oh well. The next one will probably see a proper intro anyway once I get ideas for it. Thanks for the comments.


xiaoxiaoforeverxiaoxiaoforever

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2005

not bad

over all, you did pretty well. i thought, though, that you had them talk to much. that's just me.


ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

I agree actually. Very text-heavy, this one. Still, glad you enjoyed it.


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 2, 2006

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Takes me back to my old mario playing days, but anyways it was funny with the convo between the two, the text bubbles coud be abit larger though hard to read so little, maybe some voice-overs would help on this...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A good gjost house mario themed flash...

~X~


ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

Well I'm somewhat reluctant to put voices in this series to be honest. I'll increase the text size a bit for the next episode though. Thanks.