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hope you enjoy... made mostly by jon matthews with the help of kieran jacquier. this is the 1st animation jon matthews has made!!
please please review
((( NEEDS WORK )))
Needs some work, you do have the right idea, but its abit sloppy in some areas, more dtail for one and most of all more effort, nice animation though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lots of little things will actually improve on this, backround effects, character effects and more color...
An ok flash just needs more effort and time...
i hate you
fuck you the bit when he rips the body off was mine you got it of my cartoon are you dead yet
I dont know... You took ages at this yet it good but its a rip. Good animationbut get your own style thats what makes "salad fingers" great. Infact I'll wait untill then. But I'll rate 5 stars
I hate it when people eat fruit at me! :D lmao
I agree with the last reviewer...
judging by your voice acting and the disturbing believability of the first person text I think you're a tad young... When you're starting out you need positive influences, we learn by copying. The Firth influence here was obvious, like a signboard, but at the same time it wasn't a pretentious "I want to be D. Firth" kind of similarity, it was an honest "I'm impressed and inspired" similarity.
Overall you did a very good job I think. I liked the voices and the animation. If I were to give you any advice (other than the ever-present and ever-important "make more") I would have to say try to write less in first person. It's better for your audience and much much better for your health.
Thats not bad
Huge Firth influence here, it's very obvious, But it really wasn't that bad at all, on the contrary, It WAS put together with a good deal of effort, and it showed. It's not fair to judge because it's not very original. You are the off-brand David Firth, take that as a compliment or insult, thats how I see it. I would also like to add: Keep going! The original supply isn't always enough, the world NEEDS the off-brands!
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