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didnt really try on this one this is actually first flash i made its paced wrong and looks horrible but dont blame me your all douche bags anyhow ..
((( I LIKED IT )))
I must say it does have some good and bad points, but for your first its notbad and i sorta like it, has a good idea behind it just needs more time and effort, aswell as some detail, and some compressing of the file ofcourse...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, add some more detail especialy graphics detail like backdrops...
Interesting flash a first timer but not bad , has some interesting things about it...
that was awsome
this is one of the most funniest things ive ever seen
THAT WAS SO tarable
so bad i threw up
Really good job and I really liked the charactors.
Overall it was great! Haha
And I was the saviour! I gave it a 5.
Sound, sound, my kingdom for some sound.
Liked it. It had a few of the usual "Pilot" problems, but hopefully you'll work that out the next time. Just remember to put some dialog into the mouth of that fat dude, and smooth out the animation a bit.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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