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this has taken me about a month on and off to make depending on how well this is recieved will help me to decied wether or not to make a part two
((( VERY GOOD ART )))
Wow very nice artwork, even if it seemed as if it was more "STILL" then "ANIMATED" the art was great though, along with awsome music that flowed with the story, very nice work indeed...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices for the "CHARACTER" would be great and greatly improve on the flash, could also be abit longer in the story...
A great flash with great art graphics, animating could be better, but for the most part it was a good flash with story...
It's pretty good, just not my type of interest.
This just wasn't what I look for, but overall, it was pretty good. Things u might want to fix up tho .......
1. It was kind of random and didnt make sense.
2. Bad sound quality. Put more effort into it next time.
Work a little bit more on that and it'll be pretty promising.
it was a neat little animation. i found it to be rather random overall, but it has some good potential to be a good series. i look forward to seeing more... but, i would suggest some better audio for your next one though.
Not much there
I don't mind serial efforts and anticipating the next one but there wasn't enough here to care about the next one.
This is bad...
There's just no other way to describe it. It reminds me of the video game Fahrenheit (or Indigo Prophecy in the US), which doesn't help you for originality.
Also, alwayss? If you look in cooking magazines or anything else for that matter, you will often find people judging food or movies when they themselves cannot cook or act. It doesn't take a good artist to recognize a bad one. Remember that.
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