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It was OK
Could use some graphic improuvements, and spelling improuvements.
That good but fix the
text. I used zoom but some people here are too lazy to do that (or too dumb to think that)
thanks though i really needed to know how to make a scrolling background :)
My opinion is limited in its validity
However I think its not too bad with some improvment.Your grammar needs a bit of work as you get pretty confusing when you use "an" instead of "a".
You say "This is AN good piece of pie"
You SHOULD say "This is A good piece of pie"
Got it?(simple english tut lol)
I dont know much about script at all so I cant judge that part but the artwork thing seemed ok so I gave you some points for it.I hope that you will improve your english.Script must be confusing enough without being instructed with bad grammar.
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