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Now a second animation, in the style of "Pizzacat", but more longer.
Some text are in french, but it doesn't affect the comprehension of the story. Just imagine the translation :)
PS: Sorry for the sound... My FLA file has been corrupt and I can't correct it.
Update : A fast translation for those who doesn't understand at all;
Line 1 ; Pigeon : Bird commonly called "Feathered Rat".
Line 2 ; Who care to make our life more enjoyable.
Line 3 ; ...
Line 4 ; The end. Next Week the Piranhas of the St-Laurent.
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Well i must say for a "SILENT" film it was ok, maybe abit on the short side but notbad, allthough the no sound kinda takes away from the entertainment value, but it is a silent film, and did entertain me, nice flash...
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Make it longer if you can, more story aswell...
A silent film, that means no sound people, anyways check it out its funny but short...
I like watching the Drew Pickles flash work better than this.
No sound, couldnt understand the story.. This really bored me!
I like black and white, but make it funny or interesting! Geez!
The animations themselves were alright, though i just wish you had added sounds or music. This was very boring to watch without anything to listen on. Also, not all NG-ers speak french, so i had no idea what the plot was.
Making you feel like it's an old movie, and therefore must be black and white, is a poor excuse. Add colour instead.
the title doesnt fit the flash
and even silent movies have music in the background. but if you can only speak french wat i'm saying right now is meaningless. 2
This isn`t bad for a "Noir" movie.
Please add some subtitles. I CAN`T UNDERSTAND FRENCH!
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