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Sep 15, 2005 | 8:33 AM EDT

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Cartoon Shorts: This is not a cartoon version of my lower body clothing if that's what you're thinking - This is a selection of my cartoons that weren't singularly big/good enough to be shown on their own... and i don't expect you to like every one due to some being quite random and experimental...

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KWAS71KCKKWAS71KCK

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

not bad

all of them were very random, some were stupid... but i found myself laughing at all of them. some of them because they were funny... and others because they were very ridiculous.



MHbuttazMHbuttaz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

yup...

ANGRY FISH ROCKS! pretty good, I like it..well i didn't see all of them but i intend to! so foar great work.



My-IQ-Is-122My-IQ-Is-122

Rated 5 / 5 stars

you like the spoon

i only wacthed spudman but that was so funny



ghretzelghretzel

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not funny.

The idea was ok...
Your jokes are not very funny...



MuzzoMuzzo

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Very random ... could be refined.

I like the idea of the bulleted 'shorts' list ... haven't seen something like that before. It's cool to be random, but graphics and humor could use a little work. Graphics should generally be smoother and more symmetrical. Sound was alright -- some of the dialogue could be delivered sooner (especially in "Good Conversation"). Humor should be exaggerated in appropriate shorts, such as the 'Fish Flip-Off.' For example, maybe enlarge its fin and finger for perspective and depth. The scream at the end isn't necessary. And when the fish dives into the icehole, you forgot the splash (adding some details in some of your shorts is a plus).

On the contrary, Dare Devil Dominic probably didn't need the safe landing on him, as the rolling down the hill to "Moon River" was ace by itself and had me laughing. Having the safe fall on him is almost cliche -- try a different object next time.

Just take your time with your flash animations. Maybe give yourself a checklist of things to accomplish on each animation.

Good luck with your other works.