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This is part 1 of a 3 part series. What happens in the beginning of part 1 is key to the other 2 installments.
((( NICE SONG )))
The song was pleasent and seemed to flow with the animation, i noticed the flash "LOOPED" may want to fix that explained below, anyways nice character shows good detail and decent use of color, the song really worked well, nice job...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash, it will make it run better...
A good little flash, could use some fixing, but a funny and entertaining flash, with some good flowing music...
Well Your Graphics Are Ok, Your Style Is Nothing I've Haven't Seen Before, Be The Concept Was Lacking It Gave Me Not much To Go On...
And Your Animation Was Alittle Slow At Times...
I Waznt a Fan Of The Track But I Guess It Fits The Piece.
But Still I Can't Get Tired Of O.D.ed Hookers In Dumpsters
So I Gave You A 5.
Although your animating could use some like how he was driving in the car. Other than that though this flash wasn't all that bad. I like the pizza party ad in the newspaper. Humor always adds some points!
Good animation, original... but like whoa. That was kinda weird..... but good. I'll keep a look out for part 2.
It was okay. I didn't really get it. If it had had more of a story line than... that, it would have been better. Especialy if it had been moe Frankenstein related.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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